Strudent+5+narrative

One day my dad came home from work and said “Do you guys want to go and see puppies for sale?” We all said “YA!” My mom said “When will we do that?” My dad said “We will go after dinner.” My mom said “Ok.” After we were all done eating dinner we cleaned up the table and cleaned the dishes then got in the car and we were on our way. When we got to the house with the puppies for sale we knocked on the door and the lady answered. She said “Well come on in you guys!” Her house was small on the inside and out! They had baby fences by each door way so the puppies wouldn’t get in the other rooms and make messes. She let us in the baby fence so we could see the puppies. When we got in the baby fence the puppies came right up to me and sniffed me and started wagging their tails. The puppies were so adorable! There were only two puppies left. She had four dogs but they weren’t for sale only the two puppies were. There was a boy puppy and a girl puppy. When I got up to go pet the other dogs the boy puppy went to the bathroom and it looked like a smooth bayou. I said, “EW! When they all turned around my dad said, “All dogs do that.” When the lady looked she said “I call him Little Man.” My dad and mom started to laugh. It was a pretty funny name. Luckily they had newspapers everywhere on the floor so it wouldn’t make a stain on the carpet or anything like that. After that the puppy came running to me and I picked him up and when I turned around my dad was writing the lady a check. I said “Dad what are you doing?” He said, “I’m going to buy a puppy for you!” I said, “You are?!” He said, “It’s for a surprise birthday present for you!” Then I said, “I want the girl one!” Then the lady said, “That one has a breathing problem so she wouldn’t be able to play with you as much.” My dad said “Let’s get the boy.” I picked up the girl thinking it was the boy. Then my dad said it was the girl so then I picked up the other one. My dad gave the lady the check and said thank you. Then we left for home. When we got in the car my dad said “What should we name him?” I said Max but my brother said “No that’s a stupid name.” Then I said “But I want it to be Max,” and then my dad said for every one to be quiet. My dad said, “How about Spaticas Maxamis, but Sparty Max for short.” I said “YA!” Then we were on our way home
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