Alabama+moon+keira

“ Oh hey Moon where’s your pap?” Mr. Abboscott said “ He’s dead” I replied “ I buried him up by ma” “ Oh my lord Moon you cant just bury him you have to tell the law “ “ Moon when did he die?” “ a couple of days ago” I said closing my eyes and remembering him die” “ How did he die Moon” “ He tripped and broke his leg, you know how he doesn’t like them fancy doctors. He says that I can do anything them doctors can do. But enough talk Mr. Abboscott I want to sell you this watch pap had” I said signaling him that I wanted to get on the move. Mr. Abboscott was wide eyed he opened the box put some money in it and handed the box to me. “ this is for you take care you know pap that man he didn’t care about you enough that he couldn’t see a doctor and live to see you grow up.” Ahhhh I yelled jum… Alabama Moon is a ten year old kid, Liven on his own after his pap died he believes that he can take on people three times his size. Moon does this to many people. before he gets put in juvy.

I think that it was really good. Sabrina It's good and i think it's good you took quotes from the book.