Keira's+Writing+Sandbox

Ancient Egypt Did you know if you had the money to mummify someone they would take out their brain and feed it to there cattle ? I know gross right. Isn’t it awesome, well it is? This is one of the things i ' ll talk about in my paper sooo… why not read my paper?! I ' ll be talking about pharaohs and pyramids and a lot of things. Why? Why? Why? W hy? Why? I mean it is not a waste of time believe me I would know and you 're probably thinking what’s that suppose to mean, well here’s your answer I don’t know! Well look at that I think I have a sense of humor so try    my paper out. Pharaohs were like gods in ancient Egypt. There wasn’t really a pharaoh of Egypt until 3100 B.C There was an upper and Lower Egypt. Until pharaohs Menes united upper and lower Egypt to make the double crown. As the first pharaoh. Did you know that if you could afford to be mummified they would put all this salt on you and in you and let you dry out in the sun?  First they would take out all your internwhen you go “the after world” a god would weigh your heart to a feather and if your heart was lighter then the feather then you could enter “the after life”. But if not then you would burn. So they left your heart in your body. Pyramids are triangular shaped buildings, made for the pharaohs.  Pyramids were used to store the pharaoh when he died. There were Secret chambers to hide the Pharaohs belongings al organs and put them in a bottle. Then your lungs and arteries. But they believed that  that he thought he would need in the “After life”. Another chamber so priests could worship the pharaoh after he died. Hey you finished my paper now I’m happy. Ancient Egypt is very interesting as you can see. There’s mummies and Pharaohs and, and, pyramids. Wasn’t my Paper great! Well if you try and mummify something you better be patent. It takes about three or four months. WOW! Tanner:you should just take out the yea's

Great job Kiera But take off the red Bailey good job Kiera but it was cats not cattle. good job

Tiffani  Payton: Great job just remember your punctuation.